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2.30 hours for the first and 1.45 hours for the second.
The first image was Radii? If so it isn't reading all that clear. Needs to have lines that converge to a singular point. The second image reads more clear. If you want this to be L composition you could de-emphasize the human character a bit more.
Also for your images, do the squint test and see what your value range is in your image. it feels that everything is either very bright or very dark, but not much range in-between.